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~Deangelo08092:iconDeangelo08092:

Adam  

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Sonnet 80: ToxinWhat answer shall I give these callings, here  Temptation now has stolen all my thought  At stake may be the things I once held dear  And frivolous may have been the things I sought   
Along the bottle wander both my lips  In crude prediction of its consequence  The knowledge that this toxin’s sunken ships,  Ignoring all my logic makes no sense   
The reason for my rebel act enlies  In all the grandiose nature of the scene  Where on the party’s floor I see your eyes  Beglistened with an astronomic sheen   
The light about me once no longer shone  For I c Sonnet 80: Toxin
in Sonnet 5d 20h ago
Haiku 11: Sacred WordsSince the sacred words  Aligned to form a sentence  My breath is stolen Haiku 11: Sacred Words
in Haiku & Eastern 1w 2d ago
Sonnet 79: RemorseAlong her face, so elegant and grand  Positioned are the brightest starlets known  To feel their touch embridges all the land  And from connection, love is thusly grown   
Enchanted here I feel, in captive stare  As all her soul and power follows me  Of all my lusts and losses I’m aware  As all this grand affection swallows me   
There’s no temptation able to transmute  Across the infinite bound’ries she has lain  And ne’er will I be able to refute  That all these stray affections cause me pain   
Her delicate, pernicious features force  My min Sonnet 79: Remorse
in Sonnet on 5/8/08
Sonnet 78: DistanceThose who fall to love do know exists  Between us all who love, a distance grand  But as a separation fate insists  There generally is felt a loving hand   
Across this distance met two lovers, scorned  By past endeavors’ aforementioned style  Of dangers lurking they had both been warned  But passion and their love it’d not defile   
And soon when prior distance had been linked  Emerged from them such love that there grew fire  And when the flames had died, arose distinct  Their figures, still expressing their desire   
And let this story show as verity   Sonnet 78: Distance
in Sonnet on 5/8/08
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Sonnet Rewrite

Journal Entry: Mon Mar 24, 2008, 4:57 PM
I've decided I'm going to go through and rewrite some of my earlier sonnets, as they reflect much less skill. I hope I can take them up to par with the stuff I'm doing now [not to say it's godly, lol] So far, I've updated Sonnets 1-9, 11, and 43. I've also had to change a few titles. Also, if anyone has been following along, does anyone have any feedback? I haven't gotten many comments lately and I'm concerned I might be following an incorrect path.

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  • Current Age: Fifteen
  • Current Residence: A House
  • Interests: Music, Poetry, Movies, Making Things Clutter-Free or Organized
  • Favourite movie: My Cousin Vinny
  • Favourite band or musician: Styx, Tommy Shaw
  • Favourite genre of music: Power Metal
  • Favourite artist: Michelangelo de Lodovico Buonarotti Simoni
  • Favourite poet or writer: William Shakespeare for his sonnets
  • Operating System: Windows XP w/ Service Pack 2
  • MP3 player of choice: I have an iPod, but I think I'd rather a Zune
  • Shell of choice: No Thanks, I use Sunoco
  • Wallpaper of choice: My walls are painted
  • Skin of choice: The skin of the upper thigh
  • Favourite game: Guitar Hero Series
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox/Xbox 360
  • Personal Quote: "Only the mediocre student does not become better than his teacher." - Leonardo di Vinci

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~all-my-life-i-dream:iconall-my-life-i-dream: Apr 3, 2008, 11:06:32 PM
thank you so much for the watch :hug:

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^_^ god bless ^_^
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!jessicamadison:iconjessicamadison: Mar 1, 2008, 5:17:12 AMFlagged as spam
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Wow! You really are a brilliant poet, aren't you?

Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ?


It's free and every nitwit such as myself who enters gets a small gift

but someone like you might win one of their $10 000 or $100 000 prizes.
~bleedblack8989:iconbleedblack8989: Jan 20, 2008, 1:26:17 PM
thank you for the comment and the watch :]

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"Through our bleeding, we are one.
Through the darkness breaks the light.
Through the light unending pain.
Deify the wretched ones till the darkness comes again."
~Alibragotgunshot:iconAlibragotgunshot: Jan 7, 2008, 7:32:14 PM Mood: Adoration
I ate your poems. <3
You master them to be too edible!

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...I love you, Fuck Face!
~AyumiTheWolfHanyou:iconAyumiTheWolfHanyou: Dec 23, 2007, 2:43:57 PM
thanks for the add!

so....what's up?

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:rose:
when you walk away, you don't hear me say
please, oh baby
don't go.
:rose:
~Apostate471:iconApostate471: Dec 21, 2007, 10:55:00 PM Mood: Joy
Thanks for the watching... ness... thingy!
~arc-de-triomphe:iconarc-de-triomphe: Dec 2, 2007, 12:05:10 AM
thanks for the fav.

it's nice to see that some people still write sonnets :)

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all we are-hirise stories
waiting for earthquake
~Deangelo08092:iconDeangelo08092: Nov 3, 2007, 5:06:21 PM
your words are VERY much appreciated. I always love hearing from my fanbase, though I do write poetry for the love of it. I have missed seeing new works of yours posted as well, so get on it missy! haha. Thanks again, peace out!

P.S. call me Adam :)
~tenka-chan:icontenka-chan: Nov 2, 2007, 9:44:39 PM Mood: Love
Hey Deangelo. It's been awhile. I haven't written anything new, but I have been reading your poetry and - as always - it's brilliant. If I am having a bad day, all I have to do is read some of your poetry. :)
Okay, I am done gushing! looking forward to more of your work!!!
<3

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"'Just' . . . what a horrible, candle-snuffing word."

J.M. Barrie from Finding Neverland
~tenka-chan:icontenka-chan: Oct 10, 2007, 10:24:16 PM
You got tagged.Go to my journal for the rules.

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"'Just' . . . what a horrible, candle-snuffing word."

J.M. Barrie from Finding Neverland
~daifukuUsagi:icondaifukuUsagi: Sep 12, 2007, 6:36:46 PM
AMEN.

God, I got this one, too. x_x And I fell for it.

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When we remember we are all mad, the mysteries disappear and life stands explained.

- Mark Twain
~Deangelo08092:iconDeangelo08092: Aug 29, 2007, 3:31:11 AM Mood: Anger
Because poetry.com is a scam; they have duped me once before in my earlier days and they shant again. Hint to anyone reading this; there are two ways to identify a scam poetry contest. 1) a length requirement. This way if they actually print the book they can maximize pages. 2) a huge prize, like 100k. These things are indications of what is called vanity publishing, where their target customers are actually the people being published and nobody will really end up buying the book because quite often it isn't even published. So thank you laurythompson, if that is your real name, but no thanks.
!laurythompson:iconlaurythompson: Aug 28, 2007, 7:03:27 PM
OMG! you're a GENIUS! Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ? Free to enter, 100k prize. You MUST win it!
~Deniruru:iconDeniruru: Aug 9, 2007, 9:04:20 AM
You said something about a very rough sonnet I wrote a while back and I was wondering if this new one I wrote is written well... [link]

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~rougesoleil:iconrougesoleil: Aug 7, 2007, 6:34:51 AM
Hey I really like your poems (sorry I haven't commented recently)

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How do you know that you dont like me if you can't explain why?
~ORandomEvilO:iconORandomEvilO: Jul 24, 2007, 8:06:58 PM
I was bored. So I gave you a comment! Oh aren't you blessed! lol

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Your perfect in weakness. And i'm only running in just your strength alone
~cutmeburnme:iconcutmeburnme: Jul 20, 2007, 12:30:44 PM Mood: Joy
you have good material, check out john donne, as a poet 16th century, but some of his work is incredible

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There is nothing left, yet, all I can do is stop and stare, when my life once had care
~crimsonvermillion:iconcrimsonvermillion: Jul 19, 2007, 12:08:33 AM
Thanks so much for sharing your work here! I am most inspired!

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I have a stock account at [link]
~ORandomEvilO:iconORandomEvilO: Jul 15, 2007, 10:42:20 PM Mood: Joy
Hey Adam. It's Alexis.
Welcome to DeviantArt. Your work is so amazing.
You artistic beast you!

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Your perfect in weakness. And i'm only running in just your strength alone
*A-Moonless-Night:iconA-Moonless-Night: Jul 15, 2007, 10:03:19 PM
Wicked work, keep it up! :)

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When I kiss you like a lover
That is when we discover
We are burning in the fire
This love will never tire
~Papa Roach
The Fire
~InvisibleFire:iconInvisibleFire: Jul 15, 2007, 10:00:31 PM
Hey. Welcome to DA. Nice Haiku's.
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